Monday, November 2, 2009

and electricity shooting through me

Lauren the twelve year old wrote some beautiful fan fiction under the secret name: BROKENFEATHERS.

We love Lauren.
She loved Lizzie McGuire.

Please read this beautiful story. Begin with Gordo's Summer, and then Confusion: PART 2.

Lovelovelove.
Please leave her some helpful comments.
:)


p.s. the kiss scene is the best part so far! Here's a sneak peak:

“What is it Gordo?” she wasn’t sounding nervous anymore, just worried about me.
“I, I was just noticing how amazingly attractive you are.” Stupid Gordo!

“What?” Lizzie said taken aback. “Gordo, hold on. I thought you said you didn’t like me that way.”

“Do you still like me?” Wait a minute! Just stop talking before you wreck a friendship, my mind screeched at me.

“Yeah, I do,” she said looking down and blushing.

“Well, see over the summer I…” I said trailing off. “Over the summer I found out I really do like you,” I said my secrecy coming undone.

She smiled and leaned in. Then she whispered, “let’s do something about it.” Our lips met and electricity shooting through me.

“Wow,” I breathed.

“Definitely wow,” she agreed.

2 comments:

Mary said...

I am so happy that was super cute. Lauren I love how you were called brokenfeathers.

Lana said...

I had no idea it was THAT good! Haha. Go Lauren!